Thursday, September 27, 2012

Drummer Boy of Shiloh Blog Post


In the "Drummer Boy of Shiloh", a short story by Ray Bradbury about Joby, a drummer boy who realizes his self worth and importance in battles, through a speech given to him from the general of the army.
In the "Drummer Boy of Shiloh", throughout the course of the story, not only does Joby realize his importance in battles, but also Joby matures drastically in just a few short minutes because of the general's inspiring speech.
Before the general's speech, Joby was dreading war and battle. Not only was he scared, but he was also a bit annoyed. In the beginning of the story, a peach stone fell and woke Joby up. The story goes, "In silence he listened to his own heart ruffle away, away- at last gone from his ears and back in his chest again." If just this small peach stone caused Joby so much fear, he must be terribly anxious for the battle before him. He gives off the impression that he's annoyed because in the story it says, "Me, thought the boy, I got only a drum, two sticks to beat it, and no shield." He also feels like his family is leaving him behind, "leaving him with this drum which was worse than a toy". The fact that he thinks the drum is worse than a toy, really shows what little importance he thinks he is in battle.
During the general's speech, Joby was very quiet. You can tell he was quite impressed by the general, and carefully processing his every word. At times, you hear Joby's interpretation of the speech, like when it says, "But if he beat a sure, steady, ever faster rhythm, then, then, their knees would come up in a long line down over that hill, one knee after the other, like a wave on the ocean shore." You can practically hear the excitement rising in the tone of voice. When he repeats the word, "then" you can tell he's practically jumping out of joy and excitement. He also learns that he's the heart of the army, and that if he beats slowly, the soldier's hearts would beat slowly, but if he does beat a "sure, steady, ever faster rhythm", then their march would be in sync with the rhythm of the drum, like waves on the ocean shore. I like that Ray Bradbury compares the drumbeat to a heartbeat and the ocean. The ocean takes up most of the Earth, and the drum affects most of the performance of the army, which affects the loss or victory of the battle, which affects lives. Without a heart, or a heartbeat, you can't survive, so the drumbeat and obviously the drummer boy are essential.
Near the end of the general's speech, the mood gets calmer. It went from a huge crescendo, to a very quiet decrescendo. The tone and beat of the story calms down, as well as Joby. When asked if he knew he became general when the old one is left behind it says, "The boy nodded mutely," This makes me think he's trying to process the information he received, a bit in shock, a bit in gratitude. When the general leaves, Joby says, "Goodnight, sir," in a very sophisticated and respectful manner. Then, when the general is gone, Joby faces the drum toward the moon. This gives off the impression he's giving the drum the respect it needs. In the beginning of the story the drum is described as having a great lunar face, and at the end he faces the drum's great lunar face to the moon, kind of putting everything right back in its place, which is a big step from saying the drum is worse than a toy.
I can relate to this because sometimes I feel like I can't do anything. I'm too intimidated or afraid to do something, and all I really need is someone to help boost my confidence. Sometimes all you really need is help, and someone to tell you that you can do it. I always feel more "grown up" because I know something I didn't before, and did something new as well. I think this might be how Joby felt after the general's speech.
These examples obviously show how Joby's attitude changes, but if you dig deeper, you can tell the general's speech was a wake up call for Joby to "man up". It also helps Joby realize that no matter your age, role, or responsibility that we all serve a purpose, and they are all important. When you're young you never really realize that, but as you grow up it becomes clearer. It seems like what Joby got out of the general's speech was a boost of maturity.

Saturday, September 8, 2012

13 Reasons Why


       13 Reasons Why by Jay Asher was an incredible book about Clay, a teenage boy who receives a set of cassette tapes from Hannah, a teenage girl who recently committed suicide. The story follows Clay throughout the night as he listens to the tapes and discovers the real reasons Hannah committed suicide.
       I was on the edge of my seat for the whole story- just waiting to find out what Clay had done to deserve to have been sent the tapes. Each tape was intended for a specific person, and each person's tape explained what they'd done to Hannah to affect her decision to commit suicide. The suspense just kept building until I could not take it any longer! Jay Asher definitely did a good job with that, as well as voice and tone. Whenever Clay listened to the tapes, Jay Asher always made Hannah seem mysterious, and eerie. Clay was listening to a dead girl, but her word choice and tone would make a chill go up my spine.
       I think Jay Asher wrote this book to show how one little thing you do can have a major impact on someone's future, kind of like the ripple effect. I think he also wrote it to give some people hope. I'm sure there were some people who'd been considering suicide when they read this, and by the end of the book, finally realized that life was too precious to let go in a flash. This book was probably also written to help reader's find signs in their friends  to see if they were considering suicide, or to help them get help for their friends considering suicide.
       I recommend this book to middle and high school students, I think so much can be learned from this book, and I believe everyone should read it. This book can change your life, and it can help you change someone else's life as well. Overall, this book was fantastic, and I loved it.